- English language need to be improved
- Key idea is not unique and should be related to encouragement
- Statement should put in blog
- Difference between mental illness
- Target audience- Different in mental illness or different stages
- State the major problem to the minor problem
Thursday, 14 July 2016
Week 8 Feedback for SOI document
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